Monday 25 February 2013

Week 2 Winner - Valentine



When is the Bumble Bee going to rest?

Camp was the same as usual except the part of how I found a bumble bee.
I called him Mr Fuzzy.  His black and yellow coat shimmered in the sunlight.  His delicate antlers twitched while his wings shimmered amongst the leaves.
It was only 2 more days until I was going home.  2 more days until I could let Mr Fuzzy sleep next to me on my pillow.  I couldn’t wait to show Mr Fuzzy his own bed.
“Night campers” Miss Melody called.
I put Mr Fuzzy in his tissue box.
As I snuggled up in my sleeping bag, I couldn’t stop twitching.  The word bed ran through my head.  I was eager to show my pet bumble bee his new bed.  Even though I was going to have to hide Mr Fuzzy from my parents.
I tried one more time again trying to go to sleep.  When I opened my eyes again, the bright sunlight shone through my tent.   I could hear the glorious music of the birds singing.
Our first subject for the day was finding the honey brown bear that Miss Melody hid.  Of course Nikki found it.
Mr Fuzzy laid comfortably on my shoulder.  Tomorrow would be the day I went home!  We were on our way back to the camping ground.  I bent down to pick up another flower.   It was a royal blue violet.
I then put Mr Fuzzy in the box and the heap of colourful flowers, when we reached the tents.  Before I went to bed I thought of all the fun me and Mr Fuzzy would have.  Then I closed my eyes and went to bed.
I work up disturbed by a loud beeping noise. DAD! I grabbed my bag and gently hid Mr Fuzzy behind my back.  I had forgotten to close Mr Fuzzy's box. 
As I got in the car I hadn’t noticed Mr Fuzzy climbing up my shirt.

“BEE!  Get it out!  Get it out!”  He screamed.  It was like the alarm had gone off.  I really knew not to argue with dad.  He was the king of punishment.  But I didn’t want to hurt his feelings.
I took a deep breath in and opened the door.  He was really gone.  It was the end of me and Mr Fuzzy.
Mr Fuzzy never got to sleep at my house for eternity after all.

By Valentine

Monday 18 February 2013

Week 1 Winner - Kiana

How are you arriving at school tomorrow?

Hmmmm How am I arriving at school tomorrow?  As I got up, got dressed, ate my breakfast and started thinking how can i arrive at school tomorrow?  I said to myself.  It can be something random like on a limo but its a waste, maybe if I ride on a limo it might get a flat wheels maybe some other choices....... Hmmmm how about a private jet but maybe its a bit dangerous - it might crash ....... Oh how about a boat,  I like boats cause they are so peaceful but it might sink like the Titanic.  Well I want to live!  Maybe another good idea ......Oh how about sky diving.  I think that's a good idea but I might get a serious injury.
What am I thinking!  All these negatives are giving me a headache.

"Mum!  I feel sick!"

So I guess I won't be arriving at school tomorrow.

By Kiana